Wednesday 18 December 2019

SLJ - One Small Step for Man



This is the poem I made about Neil Armstrong. I drew the picture myself.

5 comments:

  1. Hi Andrew
    This is a great rhyme poem. The background you have made is amazing. How did you make it?
    Keep up the great work
    Molly

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  2. kia ora Andrew

    My name is Bella and I used to go to your school

    I like how you did the background all by your self

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  3. Hi Molly

    I made the background using google slides. Then I used the shape tool to make planets, I made the stars using the drawing tool and I also made the light rays using drawing tools and then fading it.

    Andrew

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    1. Hi Andrew
      Wow I don't think I would be able to make that.
      Keep it up
      Molly

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  4. Kia ora Andrew,

    Firstly, wow! Your poem is amazing. You have put in a lot of effort with writing your poem as well as how you have presented it too. I really love the picture you have created and used as the background image.

    I am going to share your post with my team here in Auckland as I know they will also think your poem is fantastic.

    I also just wanted to let you know that I will be on holiday for the next 2 weeks. I will be back commenting on the 6th of January and I am already looking forward to reading the amazing posts you share over the time I am away. I hope you have a wonderful holiday break.

    Leisha
    :)

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.