This is a great attempt at this activity. I like that you have presented it as a slide. It is great to present things in a different way. But I can see that you have copy and pasted this from the article that you have to read. I would really like to give you full points for this but I need you to give it another go and put this in your own words.
I know that you can do this and do a great job. We look forward to reading your new improved post that has all the facts about the flying fish but in your own words.
Hi Andrew
ReplyDeleteThis is a great attempt at this activity. I like that you have presented it as a slide. It is great to present things in a different way.
But I can see that you have copy and pasted this from the article that you have to read. I would really like to give you full points for this but I need you to give it another go and put this in your own words.
I know that you can do this and do a great job. We look forward to reading your new improved post that has all the facts about the flying fish but in your own words.
Thanks for giving this another go Andrew.
Until next time
Allie :)